Carnal

Squat in the sin of your presence

Offer my flowers as gift that open

In order to receive

Be transported to earthy bliss

Animal instincts rush through my veins

Lips open, moans are loud

I drink from your mouth, the passion rises

Want to close my eyes

But will keep them open

More obvious that way, more arousing

You drink from my mouth and the tempo is rising

I serve myself not just wishing to give

But wanting to receive. Pleasure. Badly.

You take me and just the same, you give yourself

Most wonderful sounds of pleasure

Leave me and leave you

Humming the song of lust, pure desire

I squat in the fire of your feast

And surrender

In the highest of grounds.

By tuttysan © 2007

7 comments to Carnal

  1. Laura E. says:

    sin of passion… true feelings brought to the surface.

  2. Matt says:

    “Squat in the sin of your virile surface”

    That one sucked me in.

  3. cherrycola says:

    Uao!! passion poetry!! one of my favorites!!
    how r u???

  4. Creo que este es uno de los mejores poemas que has escrito hasta ahora. Sigue la senda…

    Besos.

    PS. Te dejé una respuesta musical a tu ‘vuelve’. Ojalá te guste tanto como me gusta a mí. Cuídate mucho, recuerda que eres mi musa.

    Paul

  5. tuttysan says:

    Gracias Paul. Los mejores poemas vienen de las mejores experiencias, no? Esta noche chequearé lo que me dejaste.

    Hola Cherry. Estoy super. Te echaré una visitadita pronto que ya es hora. Beso.

  6. krkbaker says:

    “I squat in the fire of your feast”
    Nice. Very nice.
    Kim

  7. wordlywise says:

    “I serve myself not just wishing to give
    But wanting to receive” Liked the vibe of reciprocity. And the rest of the poem is passionate!

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