Early whispers

Life happened and I forgot skin

glowing silk yogurt, endless

It happened that I forgot bliss

muted breath replenishing, silence

and one day I woke up with a ring on my finger

you whispered, “we should be together”

and I drew a blank at should

Should broken birds fly solo?

Should infants be left alone?

Should I honor your comment with a comment?

Life happened and you forgot

You forgot and life happened

I like it this way

last time you happened

It was life I forgot.

By tuttysan © 2007

5 comments to Early whispers

  1. 1poet4man says:

    Very nicely done…simply beautiful…

    Poetman

  2. Hi and congrats! I found good poetry on your blog and I liked your devotion for Dominicans.

    I am the editor of a Romanian literary magazine and I decided to dedicated a few pages to good poetry from all over the world — found on blogs — in Romanian translation, of course. That is how I got here. Please accept my invitation to contribute with two poems. If you are interested (and for more details), please contact me at ad.sumus@laposte.net.

    Thank you and keep writing. You are doing it right, that’s my opinion.

  3. last time you happened

    It was life I forgot.

    A painful and powerful end to the poem.

  4. harmonie22 says:

    So true. Ah, amore! I loved this poem, Tuttysan. From one poet to another, you write beautifully and really capture the essence of things.

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